Padawan Ben Continuation Part 10 (End)

aphorisnt:

You read that right; this is indeed finally the end! Holy shit this has been a wild ride and I’m still kind of in shock that I managed to complete all this abd actually posted it and that so many of you folks actually read and liked it!!

So part 10 is actually 2 parts, what was the rest of part 9 (I split it because 3k is a lot to read in a tumblr post) and an epilogue. I’m not 100% sure I like the epilogue but I’ve looked at it for I don’t know how long and fixing it would entail doubling or tripling the length which would take another few days and I kinda want to get this out now (maybe I’ll rewrite it or make the long version in the future, I dunno).

Huge thank you and endless love and appreciation to @swpromptsandasks​, the one who started it all!! (I know I said most of this already in an ask I sent you but I’m gonna say it again.) Without you none of this would exist and I just can’t thank you enough for the opportunity to finish this fic. Also, without you spreading the word and reblogging, none of the people reading this now would’ve even found it in the first place, so in the end I owe every single like, reblog, reply, ask, and new follower I’ve gotten to you. That support just means so incredibly much to me and I wish I had better words than just “thank you” to express my gratitude.

Another huge thank you to anyone and everyone who has read along with me as I’ve posted this thing!! I can’t put into words how much your support means to me as a beginning fic writer and just in general. I always got so nervous right before posting, just wondering if what I was writing would be even remotely ok, but the overwhelming positive response made everything worth it and it’s thanks to you folks that I’m feeling a tiny bit more confident in my writing. And if any of you have any feedback you want to give or comments you want to make

Thank you everyone who has joined me on this adventure and I hope I do the ending justice!!

(Part 1/Part 2/Part 3/Part 4/Part 5/Part 6/Part 7/Part 8/Part 9)

It started with a small twitch of
fingers, the movement barely perceptible and small enough that Anakin might
have missed it completely if it weren’t for the accompanying soft nudge he felt
through the Force. His eyes snapped open as he pulled himself out of his
meditation.

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Padawan Ben Continuation Part 10 (End)

aphorisnt:

You read that right; this is indeed finally the end! Holy shit this has been a wild ride and I’m still kind of in shock that I managed to complete all this abd actually posted it and that so many of you folks actually read and liked it!!

So part 10 is actually 2 parts, what was the rest of part 9 (I split it because 3k is a lot to read in a tumblr post) and an epilogue. I’m not 100% sure I like the epilogue but I’ve looked at it for I don’t know how long and fixing it would entail doubling or tripling the length which would take another few days and I kinda want to get this out now (maybe I’ll rewrite it or make the long version in the future, I dunno).

Huge thank you and endless love and appreciation to @swpromptsandasks​, the one who started it all!! (I know I said most of this already in an ask I sent you but I’m gonna say it again.) Without you none of this would exist and I just can’t thank you enough for the opportunity to finish this fic. Also, without you spreading the word and reblogging, none of the people reading this now would’ve even found it in the first place, so in the end I owe every single like, reblog, reply, ask, and new follower I’ve gotten to you. That support just means so incredibly much to me and I wish I had better words than just “thank you” to express my gratitude.

Another huge thank you to anyone and everyone who has read along with me as I’ve posted this thing!! I can’t put into words how much your support means to me as a beginning fic writer and just in general. I always got so nervous right before posting, just wondering if what I was writing would be even remotely ok, but the overwhelming positive response made everything worth it and it’s thanks to you folks that I’m feeling a tiny bit more confident in my writing. And if any of you have any feedback you want to give or comments you want to make

Thank you everyone who has joined me on this adventure and I hope I do the ending justice!!

(Part 1/Part 2/Part 3/Part 4/Part 5/Part 6/Part 7/Part 8/Part 9)

It started with a small twitch of
fingers, the movement barely perceptible and small enough that Anakin might
have missed it completely if it weren’t for the accompanying soft nudge he felt
through the Force. His eyes snapped open as he pulled himself out of his
meditation.

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Padawan Ben Continuation Part 9

aphorisnt:

Ok, here it it, the second or third to last part of this continuation of a fic. So close to the end!!

Thanks as always to the amazing and wonderful @swpromptsandasks who is the only reason any of this exists, and thank you to everyone who has stuck around this far in my second ficcing adventure. And an extra special thanks to everyone who reblogged and left replies; you guys all really made my fucking week!!

(Part 1/Part 2/Part 3/Part 4/Part 5/Part 6/Part 7/Part 8)

Anakin jerked awake to the sound
of his comm chirping.

Ever since they had rescued Ben
from Palpatine’s–and then Ventress’s–clutches he had refused to leave his
husband’s side for more than a few minutes at a time. True, Ben was under 24/5
surveillance, both to monitor his condition and to prevent another incident,
but after everything that had happened Anakin wouldn’t trust anyone but himself
to watch over the clone Jedi.

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Padawan Ben Continuation Part 9

aphorisnt:

Ok, here it it, the second or third to last part of this continuation of a fic. So close to the end!!

Thanks as always to the amazing and wonderful @swpromptsandasks who is the only reason any of this exists, and thank you to everyone who has stuck around this far in my second ficcing adventure. And an extra special thanks to everyone who reblogged and left replies; you guys all really made my fucking week!!

(Part 1/Part 2/Part 3/Part 4/Part 5/Part 6/Part 7/Part 8)

Anakin jerked awake to the sound
of his comm chirping.

Ever since they had rescued Ben
from Palpatine’s–and then Ventress’s–clutches he had refused to leave his
husband’s side for more than a few minutes at a time. True, Ben was under 24/5
surveillance, both to monitor his condition and to prevent another incident,
but after everything that had happened Anakin wouldn’t trust anyone but himself
to watch over the clone Jedi.

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Padawan Ben Continuation Part 8

aphorisnt:

Holy shit I’m almost to the end of this thing!! There will be at least 2 more parts and that may be it but I won’t know until I write them.

Endless thank yous and appreciation to @swpromptsandasks​ who started this whole series; I’m just picking up where she left off.

Also, my undying love and appreciation to everyone who was kind enough to like and reblog and leave replies or send me asks about this fic. You folks are the greatest and I have no words for how thankful I am for all the support.

(Part 1/Part 2/Part 3/Part 4/Part 5/Part 6/Part 7)

Compared to the
dirt and grime outside the interior of the LiMerge Power Building was
immaculate. The long, elegantly tiled hallways didn’t show the slightest hint
of the smog that choked the sky and the building’s machinery blended seamlessly
into the décor, likely signs of Palpatine’s personal touch. And every inch of
it practically oozed Darkside energy.

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Padawan Ben Continuation Part 8

aphorisnt:

Holy shit I’m almost to the end of this thing!! There will be at least 2 more parts and that may be it but I won’t know until I write them.

Endless thank yous and appreciation to @swpromptsandasks​ who started this whole series; I’m just picking up where she left off.

Also, my undying love and appreciation to everyone who was kind enough to like and reblog and leave replies or send me asks about this fic. You folks are the greatest and I have no words for how thankful I am for all the support.

(Part 1/Part 2/Part 3/Part 4/Part 5/Part 6/Part 7)

Compared to the
dirt and grime outside the interior of the LiMerge Power Building was
immaculate. The long, elegantly tiled hallways didn’t show the slightest hint
of the smog that choked the sky and the building’s machinery blended seamlessly
into the décor, likely signs of Palpatine’s personal touch. And every inch of
it practically oozed Darkside energy.

Keep reading

Padawan Ben Continuation Part 7

aphorisnt:

So this was supposed to be part of a larger chapter but then this part got long and whoops we’re at least two more chapters (plus epilogue maybe?) to the end.

Thanks as always to @swpromptsandasks without whom this continuation wouldn’t exist and  who was kind enough to let me finish what she started.

And thanks to everyone who’s been reading and for all the notes, and extra huge thank you to all you folks who reblogged and left replies!! I appreciate all of you and am just so shocked and overwhelmed at the positive response (I may have cried once or twice).

Well, without further ado, here’s part 7!

(Part 1/Part 2/Part 3/Part 4/Part 5/Part 6)

“For the twentieth Force-damned
time, I’m fine!” Anakin barked, glaring at this latest healer desperate to poke
and prod his non-existent injuries. He had escaped the duel with Palpatine
completely unscathed due to his late entry and likely a bit of luck as well.

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Padawan Ben Continuation Part 7

aphorisnt:

So this was supposed to be part of a larger chapter but then this part got long and whoops we’re at least two more chapters (plus epilogue maybe?) to the end.

Thanks as always to @swpromptsandasks without whom this continuation wouldn’t exist and  who was kind enough to let me finish what she started.

And thanks to everyone who’s been reading and for all the notes, and extra huge thank you to all you folks who reblogged and left replies!! I appreciate all of you and am just so shocked and overwhelmed at the positive response (I may have cried once or twice).

Well, without further ado, here’s part 7!

(Part 1/Part 2/Part 3/Part 4/Part 5/Part 6)

“For the twentieth Force-damned
time, I’m fine!” Anakin barked, glaring at this latest healer desperate to poke
and prod his non-existent injuries. He had escaped the duel with Palpatine
completely unscathed due to his late entry and likely a bit of luck as well.

Keep reading

Padawan Ben Continuation Part 6

aphorisnt:

Ok, here’s part 6 in the series of the continuation of the series PadawanBen. It’s another baby chapter, about 600 words, but it’s kind of it’s own thing so I’m posting it now. Again, so long as I get it done in time, the next installment will be up tomorrow.

My continued undying love and appreciation for @swpromptsandasks, without her starting this AU this continuation I’m working on wouldn’t even exist, so I literally could not have done this without her amazing writing skills!!

(Part 1/Part 2/Part 3/Part 4/Part 5)

Sedated and breathing shallowly,
but still very much alive, Tup lay on the medical bed, sporting a bacta patch
on the side of his head.

“So this chip is the cause of
Tup’s behavior?” Qui-Gon asked.

Upon arriving at Kamino Nala Se
had conducted a series of tests on Tup, absolutely certain a virus was to blame
for his sometimes catatonic-like state as well as his lashing out at Qui-Gon on
the transport. None of her tests revealed anything, however, so while she was
distracted speaking with the Prime Minister and Shaak Ti was conferring with
the Jedi Council, Qui-Gon had convinced the AZ-3 to perform the level 5 atomic
brain scan the med droid had originally suggested. That scan had revealed some
kind of chip embedded in Tup’s brain.

“I cannot say for sure,” AZ-3
replied. “There could be another cause but it is true this organic chip was
planted within him and it appears to have degraded which could have caused some
sort of malfunction.

“Are these chips in all of the
troopers?” he questioned further.

“That I cannot say for sure
either. The Kaminoan geneticists have implanted chips in clones in the past,
usually as a means of allowing buyers to control their product in some way, but
you would need to ask Nala Se for more information.”

“Wait,” Fives broke in. “What do
you mean controlling the product?”

“Many individuals or nations that
commission clones intend to use them as a labor force,” AZ-3 said. “Inhibitor
chips give those who commission them some degree of control, usually the ability
to limit certain behaviors and enforce others or to ensure cloned workers
perform specific tasks.”

“So you’re saying these chips
could be used to control us? To turn us into slaves!?” Fives nearly shouted.

“Hold on Fives,” Rex said, placing
a hand on his brother’s shoulder. “Let’s not jump to conclusions. AZ-3,” he
said, turning to the med droid, “is there anything you can tell us about the
specific chips in our heads? Anything about what they do or what they might be
used for?”

“Unfortunately, I do not have that
information. Again, you would need to ask Nala Se as she would have access to
the records that would indicated the purpose of your specific inhibitor chips.”

“Well that’s just great,” Fives
groaned. “We know she’s not gonna tell us anything. Kriff, she didn’t even want
to do that scan on Tup. I think she’s hiding something.”

“I agree,” said Qui-Gon, stepping
forward. “I sense that not everything is as it seems…AZ-3, you said there’s
information on what the chips could be used for somewhere in this facility, yes?”

“That is correct, Master Jinn.”

“Good. Then it looks like I have
some investigating to do. In the mean time, you two stay here and keep an eye
on Tup. Do not leave him alone and comm me if Nala Se or anyone else comes in.
I won’t let her dissect Tup like some kind of lab specimen.

“Thank you, sir, and we’ll hold
the fort here,” Rex said.

“Good. I’ll let you know what I
find.”

As soon as Qui-Gon left, Fives
turned to Rex.

“Sir, you’re not gonna let them
keep these chips in us, are you?”

“Not a chance, Fives,” he replied.
“AZ-3, can you perform the same procedure on us that you did on Tup?”

“Of course, but I have not been
authorized–“

“Well I’m authorizing it,” Rex
interrupted. “Get these karking things out of our heads.”

“All right then. If one of you
will follow me to the operating room next door?”

“I’ll go first,” Fives offered.

“Ok, and I’ll keep an eye on Tup
while you’re out.”

Fives turned and followed AZ-3 out
the door, ready for surgery.

Padawan Ben Continuation Part 6

aphorisnt:

Ok, here’s part 6 in the series of the continuation of the series PadawanBen. It’s another baby chapter, about 600 words, but it’s kind of it’s own thing so I’m posting it now. Again, so long as I get it done in time, the next installment will be up tomorrow.

My continued undying love and appreciation for @swpromptsandasks, without her starting this AU this continuation I’m working on wouldn’t even exist, so I literally could not have done this without her amazing writing skills!!

(Part 1/Part 2/Part 3/Part 4/Part 5)

Sedated and breathing shallowly,
but still very much alive, Tup lay on the medical bed, sporting a bacta patch
on the side of his head.

“So this chip is the cause of
Tup’s behavior?” Qui-Gon asked.

Upon arriving at Kamino Nala Se
had conducted a series of tests on Tup, absolutely certain a virus was to blame
for his sometimes catatonic-like state as well as his lashing out at Qui-Gon on
the transport. None of her tests revealed anything, however, so while she was
distracted speaking with the Prime Minister and Shaak Ti was conferring with
the Jedi Council, Qui-Gon had convinced the AZ-3 to perform the level 5 atomic
brain scan the med droid had originally suggested. That scan had revealed some
kind of chip embedded in Tup’s brain.

“I cannot say for sure,” AZ-3
replied. “There could be another cause but it is true this organic chip was
planted within him and it appears to have degraded which could have caused some
sort of malfunction.

“Are these chips in all of the
troopers?” he questioned further.

“That I cannot say for sure
either. The Kaminoan geneticists have implanted chips in clones in the past,
usually as a means of allowing buyers to control their product in some way, but
you would need to ask Nala Se for more information.”

“Wait,” Fives broke in. “What do
you mean controlling the product?”

“Many individuals or nations that
commission clones intend to use them as a labor force,” AZ-3 said. “Inhibitor
chips give those who commission them some degree of control, usually the ability
to limit certain behaviors and enforce others or to ensure cloned workers
perform specific tasks.”

“So you’re saying these chips
could be used to control us? To turn us into slaves!?” Fives nearly shouted.

“Hold on Fives,” Rex said, placing
a hand on his brother’s shoulder. “Let’s not jump to conclusions. AZ-3,” he
said, turning to the med droid, “is there anything you can tell us about the
specific chips in our heads? Anything about what they do or what they might be
used for?”

“Unfortunately, I do not have that
information. Again, you would need to ask Nala Se as she would have access to
the records that would indicated the purpose of your specific inhibitor chips.”

“Well that’s just great,” Fives
groaned. “We know she’s not gonna tell us anything. Kriff, she didn’t even want
to do that scan on Tup. I think she’s hiding something.”

“I agree,” said Qui-Gon, stepping
forward. “I sense that not everything is as it seems…AZ-3, you said there’s
information on what the chips could be used for somewhere in this facility, yes?”

“That is correct, Master Jinn.”

“Good. Then it looks like I have
some investigating to do. In the mean time, you two stay here and keep an eye
on Tup. Do not leave him alone and comm me if Nala Se or anyone else comes in.
I won’t let her dissect Tup like some kind of lab specimen.

“Thank you, sir, and we’ll hold
the fort here,” Rex said.

“Good. I’ll let you know what I
find.”

As soon as Qui-Gon left, Fives
turned to Rex.

“Sir, you’re not gonna let them
keep these chips in us, are you?”

“Not a chance, Fives,” he replied.
“AZ-3, can you perform the same procedure on us that you did on Tup?”

“Of course, but I have not been
authorized–“

“Well I’m authorizing it,” Rex
interrupted. “Get these karking things out of our heads.”

“All right then. If one of you
will follow me to the operating room next door?”

“I’ll go first,” Fives offered.

“Ok, and I’ll keep an eye on Tup
while you’re out.”

Fives turned and followed AZ-3 out
the door, ready for surgery.